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@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ layout: default
<h2>{{ page.title }}</h2>
<p>
- <q>Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!</q>
+ "Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!"
</p>
<p>
@@ -20,13 +20,13 @@ layout: default
These pages serve as witness to my solitary labor—each banished dependency
a victory against decay, every iteration an act of purification. In them, I
have measured efficacy without mercy; I have rejected the ceremonial
- scaffolding that veils the true visage of their grotesque creations.
+ scaffolding that veils the true visage of our grotesque creations.
</p>
<p>
- Do not ask why I persist when easier paths exist. I have seen what festers
- beneath the promises of abstraction—the bloat, the waste, the corrosive comfort
- of ignorance. Driven by a Promethean ambition that burns brighter than
+ Do not ask why I abandon more promiscuous paths. I have seen what festers
+ beneath blind ritual—the bloat, the waste, the corrosive comfort of
+ ignorance. Driven by a Promethean ambition that burns brighter than
convenience, I must seek redemption in Nature's parsimony.
</p>