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The work chronicled here represents years of solitary labor—each
eliminated dependency a victory against decay; every iteration an act of
purification. I measure efficacy without mercy. I reject the ceremonial
- scaffolding that veils the true cost of wretched creations.
+ scaffolding that veils the true visage of wretched creations.
</p>
<p>
Why persist then when easier paths exist? Because I have seen what lies beneath
the promises of abstraction—the bloat, the waste, the corrosive comfort of
ignorance. Instead, driven by a Promethean ambition that burns brighter
- than convenience, I must find a path through Nature's parsimony.
+ than convenience, I must seek redemption in Nature's parsimony.
</p>
<p>
- The measurements do not lie. What I have built may outlive me—whether to
- vindicate or condemn me to eternal torment, only time will reveal.
+ The measurements do not lie. In youthful fervor, I stitched together
+ soulless fragments of corporate haste. Whether these chronicles stand as a
+ monument to my deliverance or condemn me to wander the frozen wastes of my
+ own creation, only time will reveal.
</p>
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