Improve e-reader write up.

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-title: Prototype e-reader
+title: Experimental e-reader
 date: 2023-10-24
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-This project features a prototype e-reader powered by an ESP-WROOM-32
-development board and a 7.5-inch <a href="https://www.waveshare.com/"
-class="external" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Waveshare</a>
-e-paper display. 
+This project features a minimal e-reader powered by an ESP-WROOM-32 development
+board and a 7.5-inch <a href="https://www.waveshare.com/" class="external"
+target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Waveshare</a> e-paper display built
+with the intention of learning about e-paper displays.
 
 <video style="max-width:100%;" controls="" poster="thumb.png">
   <source src="ereader.mp4" type="video/mp4">
@@ -57,20 +57,20 @@ PDF documents to EBM files.
 
 ## How does it work?
 
-As the e-reader has no storage, it can't store books locally. Instead, I first
-have to upload the EBM file I want to read to a web server. The `EBM_ARCH_URL`
-setting in the Kconfig.projbuild file points to the URL of the file. To read a
-different book, I create an EBM file with the same name and upload it to the
-original location. That way, I don't have to modify the `EBM_ARCH_URL` value,
-which requires recompiling the embedded software. 
+As the e-reader has no storage, it can't store books locally. Instead, it
+downloads pages of the EBM file over HTTP from the location pointed to by the
+`EBM_ARCH_URL` setting in the Kconfig.projbuild file on demand. To read a
+different book, we have to replace the old file with the new one or change the
+`EBM_ARCH_URL` value. The latter requires us to recompile the embedded
+software. 
 
 Upon powering up, the e-reader checks the reading progress stored in the RTC
 memory. It then downloads three pages (current, previous, and next) to a
-circular buffer in DMA-capable memory. When the user turns a page, one of the
-microprocessor's two cores transfers it from the buffer to the display over a
-Serial Peripheral Interface (SPI). The other downloads a new page in the
-background. I use the ESP-IDF task API to distribute the two tasks between the
-available cores for maximum parallelism.
+circular buffer in DMA-capable memory. When the user turns a page by pressing a
+button, one of the microprocessor's two cores transfers it from the buffer to
+the display over a Serial Peripheral Interface (SPI). The other downloads a new
+page in the background. I used the ESP-IDF's task API to distribute the two
+tasks between the available cores to make the reader more responsive.
 
 I designed the EBM format with HTTP streaming in mind. Since the pages are laid
 out in the EBM file along predictable boundaries, the e-reader can request
@@ -80,11 +80,15 @@ web server will process this request without custom logic.
 ## Reflections
 
 It's been six years since the car park and the displays. I began this project
-hoping to learn the low-level workings of e-paper displays. As a bonus, it led
-me to explore some of ESP32's most fascinating features: sleep modes, multicore
-processing, DMA, and RTC memory. Embedded systems are magical things: invisible
-particles swirl into form as the programmer whispers C.
-
-
+hoping to learn more about e-paper displays, and I got that and more. By
+working within the constraints of the ESP32, I forced myself to explore some of
+its advanced features: sleep modes, multicore task scheduling, DMA transfers,
+and RTC memory. 
+
+As for the prototype, while it's no match for a commercial e-reader with
+features like an offline library of books and touch screens, there's something
+to be said about reading on hardware you built yourself. You are no longer the
+powerless Muggle watching others perform magic. You are the wizard who makes
+the invisible particles swirl into form by whispering C to it.
 
 Files: [source.tar.gz](source.tar.gz)