Victor F. about page - 3.

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     The work chronicled here represents years of solitary labor—each
     eliminated dependency a victory against decay; every iteration an act of
     purification. I measure efficacy without mercy. I reject the ceremonial
-    scaffolding that veils the true cost of wretched creations.
+    scaffolding that veils the true visage of wretched creations.
   </p>
 
   <p>
     Why persist then when easier paths exist? Because I have seen what lies beneath
     the promises of abstraction—the bloat, the waste, the corrosive comfort of
     ignorance. Instead, driven by a Promethean ambition that burns brighter
-    than convenience, I must find a path through Nature's parsimony.
+    than convenience, I must seek redemption in Nature's parsimony.
   </p>
 
   <p>
-    The measurements do not lie. What I have built may outlive me—whether to
-    vindicate or condemn me to eternal torment, only time will reveal.
+    The measurements do not lie. In youthful fervor, I stitched together
+    soulless fragments of corporate haste. Whether these chronicles stand as a
+    monument to my deliverance or condemn me to wander the frozen wastes of my
+    own creation, only time will reveal.
   </p>
   
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